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Beautiful Flesh

Post by Luving Jan on Mon Aug 20, 2012 5:36 am

People say that beauty can be a powerful thing, but can beauty be an evil rising as well? They say that a mysterious woman wanders around from town to town, country to country, but no one has seen the womans face. Her story is told to scare children to sleep and it's considered to be ome what of an urban legend. People say, her eyes hunger for the drop of life. She has skin as pale as the moon rises and hair that fades as the color of the night sky when the sun sets. Their are people who say that hunger is impossible to possess if you are beautiful, but can beauty feed the hungered once they were fed?
People say, when the sound of The night howls, She creeps through the homes of unknown strangers around town. Rumors were told once that about a man
near by vanishing....
"who is it?" the man asks...
He notices a woman that appears to be in a purple silky robe in the dark. Her face was concealed as she looked down at the ground.
"Who are you?" the man asks.... but only silence acknowledge his question.
The man shivers and closes his window but peeks at her throught the curtains.
"I am cold" she says... "Help me"
The woman now reveals herself. The man admires her beauty. He gazed at her almost hypnotised by her.
Her hair was as soft as a feather, eyes shined as bright as gold, and Her body was delicate. He lets the woman into his home and he is never seen again. No one knows what really happened to the man, but the stories vary as they are told to others.
Every year after, the town holds a festival and all the towns people sing and dance. Men, women, and children gather together to tell stories on how she contiued to wander the lands she has stumbled upon.
People claim that they have seen the woman but something changes everytime they see her. They say that as the dawn rises, her hair becomes long and blackened. They say her eyes become flesh and strike and her body becomes bold and full. She will remain beautiful and powerful for all eternity. According to legend, there's a way to know she is around. Evil laughter fills the silent night.
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Re: Beautiful Flesh

Post by Scairry on Mon Aug 20, 2012 5:43 am

o_o Wow. I thought you said you weren't that great at writing stories. Hmmm....

I have suspicion to believe that you lied about being bad at it! Shocked

Because this is some great quality writing right here. Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil

And if this is going to be the case, then you're even better than me. Suspect
Actually, that shouldn't be that difficult to accomplish, because I'm really not a story writer.



...Yet.

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Post by Notorious Joker on Mon Aug 20, 2012 5:55 am

I can't wait to read the next one! tongue

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Post by Luving Jan on Mon Aug 20, 2012 5:57 am

Scairry wrote:o_o Wow. I thought you said you weren't that great at writing stories. Hmmm....

I have suspicion to believe that you lied about being bad at it! Shocked

Because this is some great quality writing right here. Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil

And if this is going to be the case, then you're even better than me. Suspect
Actually, that shouldn't be that difficult to accomplish, because I'm really not a story writer.



...Yet.

Actually U know erica I did make the story but thanks to jack he edited it for me to make it sound neater LMAO
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Post by Scairry on Mon Aug 20, 2012 6:06 am

Luving Jan wrote:Actually U know erica I did make the story but thanks to jack he edited it for me to make it sound neater LMAO

Oohhhhh! That's cool. Very Happy

Well, glad to see you decided to go with that method. Great work you two. Smile

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Re: Beautiful Flesh

Post by Scairry on Mon Aug 20, 2012 2:12 pm

Razz This is not the story I read and responded to last night. But this is dark and mysterious. A good read, too.

I quite enjoy reading the writing around here. ♥️♥️♥️

So, thank you.

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Post by Luving Jan on Mon Aug 20, 2012 2:46 pm

Thank U Erica<33 LOL u see this was my real story xD and the one that jack just posted is his. xD but I do thank him very much for editing it for me cause the original was just too slang LMAO
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Post by Kool Boi on Mon Aug 20, 2012 2:48 pm

Wow amazing story. Nice.
Looking forward to another one!
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Post by Luving Jan on Mon Aug 20, 2012 2:54 pm

Kool Boi wrote:Wow amazing story. Nice.
Looking forward to another one!
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Thanks Jaeven! im glad you liked it. You should check out Jacks stories as well they are very good too =)
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Post by Kool Boi on Mon Aug 20, 2012 2:57 pm

Oh can't wait to hear his!
Infact gonna check some oh hsi out right now!
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